All is Fair...in Love (Chapter 2)
Posted Jul 9, 2014, 6:15 AM UTC · edited
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Pancakes be damned, those there are some good waffles!
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Hey, pancakes kick ass, don't be hatin'!
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Yeees, I am slowly drawing you to the one true side of pancakes.
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Give in to the dark side! Let the syrup flow over you!
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I'm guessing hybrid babies next?
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( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)
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Who knows?
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I noticed something, though. You said that the Space Elves were mammals, yet you also stated they lay eggs (which is how i understood it. I might have misunderstood).
The two are not compatible as mammals give birth to live young. Unless she was talking about her womb/ovaries (or her races parallel).
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Relevant to your interests.
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#### Monotreme:
Monotremes (from the Greek μονός monos "single" + τρῆμα trema "hole", referring to the cloaca) are mammals that lay eggs (Prototheria) instead of giving birth to live young like marsupials (Metatheria) and placental mammals (Eutheria). The only surviving examples of monotremes are all indigenous to Australia and New Guinea, although there is evidence that they were once more widespread. The existing monotreme species are the platypus and four species of echidnas (or spiny anteaters). There is currently some debate regarding monotreme taxonomy.
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Thats...interesting....
I thought one of the main indicators for a mammal was birthing live young. Appears i was wrong. Never mind then.
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How about some kind of technology to make it happen, dna splicing sounds cool
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Humanityyy!! FAP YEAH
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Look out! He's got a boner and it's gonna explode!
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All over some xeno slu-... umm... Scum! I definitely meant xeno scum
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Max would not be pleased. You don't want to find out how strong, quick, and mean he can be.
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It seems max is already as pleased as possible dude
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Jesus Christ!
I humbly pass the torch of Flour-based breakfast food to you, my worthy successor.
I...wow! I don't know what to say! Thank you!
I'm pretty sure you got horny just writing that. Too bad Miller is gonna be forgotten. :/
Yeah, I did :-) isn't that half the point?
And Miller is not forgotten. I didn't write this series as a frame for smut. The smut has a purpose. Next episode: two very confused ambassadors confront the consequences of their epic pornomancy, and of their impossible empathic links.
Jesus Christ. I need a cigarette after reading this.
Now that is a compliment. Thanks!
Uhhhhhhhh...
Am I drooling?
I hope so! Did it work for you? I was a little worried because this is definitely hard-core, but I need it to be for the story to work going forward.
I would recommend using words other than awesome and the like, as they seem to detract from the action, and give a sense of artificial/preconceived action to the piece. Otherwise, good job and please continue.
A fair point. In my defense, when I use "awesome" I mean in its older, "fills one with awe" sense. Perhaps I haven't conveyed that sufficiently.
Regardless I will almost certainly edit this post over the next little while, as I notice grammar and style issues. I generally substitute better words when I do this, as long as I don't change the meaning.