That was the intention, a poem within a poem, glad you enjoyed it.

I really like the piece overall, no true suggestions, I'm just curious about the bold, is it like a poem in itself, I've never seen that done, but the line of bold, "we cry out like country folk into the pine raked sky" is pretty cool


Tearing down **logging roads** in a battered jeep    
Dodging rocks and stumps and **potholes**    
Laughing like hyenas as **mud kicks** up, painting the windshield    
Gunning corners into **tail whips** and four wheeling terrain    
**We cry out** at the near misses and near rolls    
Living without tomorrow **like country folk**    
As the sun dips we tear **into the** dark    
of one last **pine raked** trail    
Then shoot off down county roads lit by a full moon **sky**    
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-d. Evagreens-

Out for a Rip