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swisskinist•

Yes, the chicken industry, like most industries, is terrible. We buy our chicken from a local Amish farmer here in Ohio. In my opinion, there is no solution inside industrialism; industrialism itself has to go, along with big corporations. We need to get back to small local communities again.

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0rganicSgt2•

Awesome! Thanks for the comment. I personally get my eggs and chickens from a local Muslim farmer.

Anyway, any advise on my writing, content, etc.? Anything you feel I should add in or exclude?

Thanks!

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swisskinist•

I enjoyed it because I could feel the passion in the writing. I appreciate the call to action, and the call to be angry against what is clearly wrong. Too many writers today try to be too nice and preach a form of moral relativism.

I thought it was interesting that you anticipated hateful comments coming your way. When you speak the truth dogmatically and don't allow for everything to think and do what they feel comfortable doing, then you will have idiotic comments coming your way. But that just comes with the territory. Our job is to speak God's truth (in Jesus Christ) and leave the results up to him.

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