Some advice

Try to relax
And be yourself.
reject what other people say.
Act sincerely.
I should not have to ask this of you really.

You are an independent entity.
Society does not determine your identity.
Your decisions should be made by you.
Listen carefully now:
Don't let me tell you what to do.

Previous critiques: http://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/2uxdp0/we_walked_through_the_meadow_the_moonlight_and_me/

http://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/2v5s71/heartbeat/