[1186] Warrior, Shaman, Thief and Mage/Prologue/Fantasy/Placeholder title

UPDATE: The original DOC is now for viewing only. I'll be adding/subtracting, and revising over the course of a few days. Critiquing still welcomed. Keep it civil.

Feel free to still critique and comment. I'll leave the original doc open for editing. I'm working on my 2nd rough draft, and will post soon. Feedback much appreciated!

I've been developing a fantasy series for awhile now, and I wanted to practice with a classic Good Vs. Evil short series. I've spent several days working on the prologue - critiquing, tweaking, reading and rereading. I think I have a pretty solid start, IMO, but I'd like more opinions.

I want anything you guys/gals can throw at me, good/bad, doesn't matter just be constructive. That all includes LINE/GENERAL/STYLE/PLOT/CHARACTERS/IMAGERY/SETTING/GRAMMAR/PARAGRAPHING/The whole 9 yards.

On a side note, I wanna know what questions you're asking yourself when you read, that is, if you liked it.

Warrior, Shaman, Thief, and Mage -- Link Open for viewing only.