[2817] I've Got a [Long Title] Mk. 2

I've Got a [Long Title] Mark II, Electric Boogaloo.

First of all, biiig thank you to everyone who commented on my last submission! I wasn't aware of what wasn't working and your critiques helped sooo much!

For those who expressed concern about the title, I'm keeping it as is for now, at least as a working title, since I've been using it so long. :P I may change it when I'm finished.

Okay! Round two! This is the complete first chapter (as is), instead of just the opening blurb. For specific advice, I mostly want to know if Chris is too annoying to sympathize with. I've had panic attacks in the past, so for me it seems (reasonable? normal?) within the scope of regular behavior, but for someone who's neurotypical, is it just friggin annoying?

Umm, other than that, have away! I drank too much caffeine this morning, so I'm a bit overly nervous and shaky. So warning, may not reply for a bit. But don't worry about crushing my hopes and dreams!

ADVANCE TRIGGER WARNING: Manipulative relationships, elements of abuse, physical assault, sexual assault, language, panic attacks, I'm a terrible human being, etc.

I've Got a Long Title Chapter 1

SPOILERS I have another specific question!!! "Okay did it seem like he got raped?? Because I didn't mean for that to actually come across but I don't know how to make it less so???")

EDIT: Pls. I'm too cocky. Pls come to destroy me.