Decided to write my hometown up for Shadowrun

I live in Fresno, California, and I always thought it would be fun to run a game here in my hometown. To that end, I started writing a setting document for it, available for view here. Information on CalFree State in 5th edition is pretty sparse, so I'm essentially just making it from whole cloth. To that end, any feedback or suggestions would be appreciated. I just started it earlier tonight, I'm still planning on adding gangs and criminal players. The idea I have for Fresno is that in terms of the Shadow community, there's a lot of work to do, but mostly runners end up there because they've fucked up so badly they've been effectively banished from bigger cities, or their skills just aren't up to snuff to hack it somewhere like Seattle.