more of a mind barf than a poem

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I want my tides to calm and my ripples to fade  
I want my fevers to cool and my fires to be put out  
I want my palms to stop sweating and my toes to stop curling  
I want the green light across the water to turn red and for the blue cloud over me to float off  
Deep rivers hold more life but shallow pools let you live  

https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/3edhnc/common_life/cte5rlc https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/3ee5mz/orientation/cte5j41

Posted Jul 24, 2015, 3:01 AM UTC

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