[FEEDBACK] Aethynox (Action/Fantasy, 20 of 115 pgs)

Hello, I'd like some feedback on this script I wrote. I'm still new to the craft and developing my voice, but any advice and whatnot is appreciated. Here is the script.

Logline: In a world where magic is normal, a talented but arrogant racing star must enter a life-or-death race to save her brainwashed childhood friend from a black magic cult.