[Script Offer] [F4M] The Harlequin [Batman] [Fantasy] [Bondage]

I've been lurking here for a while and finally plucked up the courage to try my hand at a script of my own for someone to look into. It has been a long time since I've done any real writing, and I've never written anything like this before:

I've done my best to tag it appropriately too - but apologies if I've missed anything off.

"Following the death of her beloved Joker, Harley manages to lure the Batman into a trap and has her wicked way with him. She struggles between her two personalities; the wild and unpredictable Harley Quinn and her calm, rational counterpart Dr. Harleen Quinzel as the sexual tension between her and Batman finally reaches its climax."

This has been specifically written to take into account Harley's split personalities, so it would be best approached by someone who was willing and able to do two different voices - a sickly sweet voice for Harley and a more soft, sultry voice for the good Dr.

[Script - "The Harlequin"]

I would appreciate any feedback and suggestions - either from others who've written scripts or from the voice of gonewildaudio, who can hopefully help me understand what you're looking for in a script to make it work.

EDIT: I have taken on board a lot of the feedback I've received in this thread, in a script writing feedback thread and through private messages and I have altered the script slightly. There are not many changes, but hopefully the changes that I have made will make the script a bit more enjoyable - both to perform and to listen to.

If you want to record this audio, please feel free to use whichever version you prefer.

[Script - "The Harlequin v2"]

Any further feedback would be greatly appreciated, as always.