[review video] what Call of Duty: Advanced warfare did right. Any improvements needed?

Video: https://youtu.be/IK4CAyPoxe0

review one:https://www.reddit.com/r/youtubers/comments/3l20uh/review_video_donald_trump_for_president/cv2qmzm

Review two: https://www.reddit.com/r/youtubers/comments/3ktif9/review_video_gears_of_war_funny_moments/cv2r20x

Self review

I think I have improved from my previous videos trying to sound more confident and engaging, as well as trying to add some more personality to my videos rather than sounding like a national geographic commentator with a monotone voice, I tend to breathe in a lot which I hope I can improve and I have reduced the amount of "urms" and stuff but still making them.

Questions

Is the audio level okay? Is the background music good? Does my voice sound like it has some personality in it? Is my gameplay okay to watch? are there any improvements needed?

thank you and I hope you have a nice day!