[Review Video] New Plains of Betrayal!

So I've been playing through the Plains of Betrayal mod on Fallout New Vegas, and here's the latest episode:- https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=exnfXnWZVRA

I've been working on my introduction as if you watch from episode one, the quality has scrubbed up rather well, but opinions on the intro? Is it too much, is it too in your face, does it need toning down or is it okay? Gameplay itself, I normally use one take, due to the fact that if you stop you don't really want to start again, all creative flow gets lost, but do I leave too many gaps of silence, should it be shortened or sped up to action or would that be too tacky? The audio quality has improved a fair bit since my first ever video, in which I've also gained confidence in my vocal abilities, but should I record with a different output, i.e. Audacity and overlay, and is there any feedback for the quality, I know I pop in some cases, but I have been getting better! And content, is it funny? Does it keep you intrigued, or enticed, does it make you wanna go back and watch episode 1 to see how we go to this point?

Thank you! :) My reviews:- https://www.reddit.com/r/youtubers/comments/3kwft0/review_video_fresh_air_zombi_episode_2_our_first/cv2ve8g https://www.reddit.com/r/youtubers/comments/3kxgxc/review_video_do_you_like_shaving_your_dad/cv2v53s