[Translation] Help me translate one sentence into French please!

I want to say "When you're a woman in Florida, if you leave at 23:50 to run, you will never return"

I have this: "Quand tu es une femme en Floride, si tu pars à 23h50 a courir, tu ne jamais reviendras"

But it doesn't seem right to me. Could someone help me out? Thank you!