I need to go to sleep.

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I have to get up early,
I need to go to sleep.
I want to take a shower,
I feel like I should eat.

My brain won't stop,
My mind wants to wander.
I want to turn you off,
You're always such a bother.

I'm running out of time,
The sun is coming quick.
I hope I fall asleep,
Just go to bed you dick.

(I could not for the life of me go to sleep one day, and this popped into my head. It's supposed to be kind of funny and be simplistic. Was kind of shooting for a Silverstein-eqse vibe. Does anyone like it?)

https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/3nnnlq/colourcoloured_colours/cvpx87i  
https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/3nmakc/tacet_triste/cvpxha6

Posted Oct 6, 2015, 9:58 AM UTC · edited

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