[F4M][Script Offer] OKAY so I LOST our bet (Shut up the fuck up so I get this over with) [Fdomme][Bet][Resentful][Tsundere][Handjob][Countdown][Cursing]

This script starts right at the action. The backstory that gets hinted at is that the hot-tempered narrator lost a bet with her friend (the listener), and as a result is now begrudgingly 'paying up'.

There are some notations in the script for tone. Overall, I see the narrator keeping a mostly snarky, pissed off tone with occasional slips into condescension (because she is JUST. THAT. MAD... er, kinda. Mostly...) You could also infer that the narrator is getting into it, maybe even pretty early on. But that the 'anger' is part of what the listener finds hot. Sexy. Dangerous. And also.. familiar. Part of the narrator, their friend, and what makes them 'them'. And the narrator enjoys this, too. And also gets off on the showmanship of it. And plays along...

However ....

Please, please, PLEASE feel free to ad-lib, edit, redact, etc., as you see necessary (or even just fun) if this script does inspire you. My opinion is that the best audio are the ones that the VA isn't afraid to adjust to suit their strengths and/or challenge themselves as they see fit. A script definitely helps, but the real magic usually comes from the VA putting their own stamp on it.

This is my second script. I want to keep improving, and I also like to see the reaction my output gets from others in this great community -- why else put fantasy to paper or sound, right?

Any and all comments, feedback, critique, typo corrections, and especially recordings are definitely welcome and appreciated!

[F4M][Script Offer] OKAY so I LOST our bet (Shut up the fuck up so I get this over with) [Fdomme][Bet][Resentful][Tsundere][Handjob][Countdown][Cursing]

(Pastebin link: http://pastebin.com/DAgJiphS )

[stroking noises]

Whoa
What
The
FUCK
did you just say?

I told you.
No talking.
You shut your damn mouth right now.
What's that?
Yeah.. thaaaat's what I thought

Don't forget I am just doing this because you
won
that stupid.
FUCKING.
bet.
Grrrrr, I can't BELIEVE you--

Oh, wait now, what's that??
You wanted to say something?
Going to tell me WHY you have that smirk?
Maaaybe you wanted to say [mocking]'oh, what a temper you have'
Or tell me how fucking 'hot' I am, when I'm pissed off?
Like every other asshole seems to thinks it's soooo clever to point out?

Then go right ahead
Open your mouth
Just do it
I
Daaarrree
You
...cause I will stop

Yep

I will LEAVE you right HERE

with this enormous fucking hard-on

and your balls filled to the brim with sperm

...
[condescending]

Awwww, good.
That's what I thought
Not such a tough guy after all, huh?

Hmph
Guess I'm not getting out of this...
..
hmmmm
welllll

In that case, I may as well speed this up
I mean, I don't have all day

So what can I do to ...
Oh, duh

You're obsessed with my tits, so--

What's /that/ look supposed to
Oh, you didn't realize I..knew that?
Uh yeah
I'm always catching you staring at my fucking chest
Well get a good look now, tit man
Cause it's the last chance you'll get
Here, I know, I'll just..

WHAT now?
Uhh WHY are you looking so anxious??
Isn't this your fucking dream? To poke at my sofffftttt chest with---

Ohhh
Is that it..?

Awwww
This /IS/ your fantasy, isn't it?
Me, your close friend,
easy on the eyes
but SUCH a temper
such a.. bitch.
Yeah.
The idea that she
That girl
Is..
ever so reluctantly,
jacking you off
and hell, even..
Letting your feel the soft curves of her chest..against your rock hard erection?

Shit, a sick fuck like you is probably even getting OFF on how [breathes, enunciates] 'annnngggry' this makes me
Soo fucking mad. That's why I keep cursing. And calling you out
for the fucking cocky piece of shit that you are.
[licking lips]
And knowing that this is just a one time thing
Just what it is
Nothing more,
well god, YOU probably want it to last...
forever
Right?

But ohhhh
All that want
That need
It just keeps building
and boiling
and...
bubbling up?
ALLLL that hot, bubbling cum, just ready to p-p-pop like a champagne cork

So now you're going to blow pretty much right away
Already?
It's kind of tragic, almost
Really
Jusssstttt
Tragic

Really

But ooooo
You know what's even worrrse?
I don't care
I WANT you waste it
I WANT this fantasy of yours
This sick fucking DEMEANING fantasy
(I mean, GOD, who thinks a girl being forced to.. 'please' you
..against her will..like this
..on her knees
looking up at you,
your big powerful body,
fiercely gripping your hard, throbbing cock
...
I mean who thinks that this
is... 'sexy'? Right?)
I want it to be ruined
Yeah
That's sort of my little revenge

So no
This won't last long
I won't be taking you to the brink
and back
over and over
ohhhhhhhhhhh
nonononono
Not tonight, you little fucker

Instead

You are going to cum
and you are going to do it NOW
Because I am jacking you off onto my chest
that chest that you love to ogle like a fucking idiot
That you obsess over
And by the time I get to 1, that hot sticky cum
BETTER spurt out all over my big tits

10

9

8

You heard me
If you don't COVER my chest by the time I get to 1..
Oooohhhh

7

Do you like it?
When I make noises like that?
[moans..]
(down to 6 now by the way)
Does it make you think that oooooo
that uhhh I'm getting OFF on this?
ooooo b-
b-b-b...because
5
Oooo

I'm not.
Yeah.
I'm just fucking with you, stupid
oooooo
4

But how is a shithead like you suppppppposed to know the dddddddd

the ddddd
3

[constrained, tiny squeal to this]
ddddifference?

2

This is your last chance
Do you hear me?

You better shoot your hot load ALLLL over me when I get to..
here it...
h...h..here it..
COMES

1
That's it baby, shoot it! Come for me! Get this the fuck over with so I can ooohhh
ohhhhhhhhhhhhh

Ho-Holy shit!
I I --How many shots was--?!
That got fucking EVERYWHERE! I--
[regain composure a bit]
Well then..you really CAN learn to follow directions

OOOKAY!
Well. Now uh. Now we're eeevvveeennn!

Hmm?
What?
Oh, you're wondering if you can talk now?
Hmmmm
You know, you were such a baaaad boy
Forcing your innocent little friend to do that
over a silly little bet

So maybe for now you shouldn't talk? All right?
But uh..
Yeah.
You can open your mouth.
And uh..
f-f-finish making this up to me
S-s-strictly business.
Of course
Oo!
Bad boy!

Youuu ff...fffucker..
[moan]

[script by u/notRewound for r/gonewildaudio]
[Comments, critique, recordings, requests all welcome]