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JLive55

Text me.

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Your voice fills my heart with warmth, and
every time I see you laugh I can't help but smile.
The conversation flows so easily between us, and
I'm begging you to stay for a while.

But you must go, and as you leave,
you turn back with a look of glee,
melt my heart with those eyes, and slip in a quick, "Text me!"

I sigh.

Because I don't want to text you.
I don't want to erase this moment
and fill it with emotionless crap that will only lead to torment.

I want to sit here, and be happy
thinking of what we just shared
hoping and praying that you'll come back
and being a healthy kind of scared.

I want to miss you and wonder if you're missing me
I want to know that this feeling is true I want to be all that you're thinking about (not texting about) because all I ever think about is you.

definitely need some help with this one, but I like the idea. Constructive criticism is welcome!

https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/3ie39o/need_to_perform_at_open_mic_thursday_looking_for/cufq609https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/3j7i6e/amsterdam/cunlvo7

Posted Oct 23, 2015, 6:56 PM UTC

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