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Valchrist

I can be cold

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i can be cold.
all it takes is nothing.
what lovely
nothing i am,
the empty space
in a snowflake.

it takes more
to be more than cold,
and i won’t.

i can be absolute.
oh! my emptiness
shivers into you,
a time lapse
of nothing happening
to itself.

http://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/3r801o/finders_losers/cwlv4bg

http://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/3r86hg/z/cwlups8

edited for formatting

Posted Nov 2, 2015, 6:52 PM UTC · edited

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