I am the child that does not progress

Any feedback or suggestions for improvement are always greatly appreciated, i would especially like to know whether the repetition works or not.

i am the child that does not progress 
a black mark on the record 
the devils lover 
disgusting mess to family and friends 

i am the broken glass in your bed 
the black dog on the hillside 
the pizza cutter 
taken to both arms and neck 

i am the mould growing in the fridge 
the black mark on your hand 
a faux lover 
scratching until the nights end 

i am the claws in the back of your head 
the black lines unspoken 
a childless mother 
praying for divine intervention

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