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M-J_Logan

Star lit night

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One night a elderly astronomer was looking to the starlit night one last time,

He remembered a poem he heard as a young man that didn't rhyme-

"As you look upon the starlit night, remember- don't shed a tear,

If you do your tears and very soul will (be?) lost that starlit night"

He gazed upon the star and shed a tear so his soul will be in the stars for this starlit night one last time

That ended his night with a rhyme. https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/3s6748/spectrum_and_the_shade/cwumvhm https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/3rx6xw/masks_a_haiku/cwumgv9

Posted Nov 10, 2015, 7:43 PM UTC

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