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davetheknave101

you said you'd come back

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you said you'd be back,

but you still went away.

leaving me, you left me alone,

with no one to care for me.

you walked out my door and into the night,

you went back to that place of total despair.

you shot up and rode the draqon.

you got lost out there in the pain.

who are you now?

no longer the eyes I once knew.

you fell into the madness.

where are you now?

I don't know the taste of your lips.

you wen to the place I cannot go.

but you make me want to follow,

because I would follow you into the dark.

you speak,

I listen;

you command,

i obey.

you said you'd come back,

I believed.

https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/3szdt2/you_only_love_me_in_the_dark/

https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/3t3gvs/pain_feeds/

Posted Nov 17, 2015, 4:34 AM UTC

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