Where Should I Love Thee?

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I love thee at the frozen shore,

the land called Winter's Wail,

where many hearts did dock before,

yet not a ship could sail.

I love thee at the apple's cane

wherein no fruit can birth;

and supped at wells that washed in vain

the salt which scorched the earth.

I love thee where the sparrows dwell

in wait upon the morn,

where broken wings doth doom to fell

the life the sky hath torn.

I loved thee where in exile pined,

the secret place once called My Mind.

   

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Posted Nov 18, 2015, 10:57 PM UTC · edited

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