[2484] The Cost of Living

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1SMR_P_XBAWdYcGKE0q_2C7OlUGbQi3_6nu0Whm90h4c/edit?usp=sharing

So I'm just really tired of looking at this story. Is it worth trying to do something with or is it just too much? It's pretty dark.

Edit: I disabled the link so I can begin editing. I got a lot of really helpful critiques, so thanks everyone.