An Impression Along A Pier

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Bespectacled with a certain sadness

I saw you change the tide along the shore

I try to believe not any of it happened

That it wasn't you, only what I wanted, tinted rose

Should be a crime, a tsunami along the gulf

When I need a hurricane to temper emotion

I could feel nice feeling myself lost in the sand

I could even ignore you were forged by volcano

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Posted Nov 20, 2015, 9:49 AM UTC · edited

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