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Valchrist

how constellations feel

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you named me like a constellation,
after what i reminded you of in the dark.

but what of evening?
who am i then, before trees draw enough shadow to fool the streetlights? am i even there?

in the morning am i some new ghost,
still in his pajamas, who can’t turn off his bedroom lamp?

you showed me that dawn and dusk are ways of leaving.
i can watch all the little headlights flip
on or off to oppose it,
but no one stays for long.

i don’t know where daylight leaves me,
with everything where yesterday left it.
in the creeping light, i’m still your stiff figure of stars
until i can no longer hold the pose.
when you go is when i forget.

i forget
where i was
before the sun set.

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Posted Nov 24, 2015, 2:43 AM UTC · edited

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