A Poem For Her

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It could have been her sky touched eyes.

It could have been her rose kissed lips.

It could have been her contagious smile.

It could have been her shapely hips.

 

Perhaps it was the way she laughs,

How it is either loved or hated.

Perhaps it was the smell of her hair,

Its ability to make me feel intoxicated.

 

Or maybe it was nothing physical,

Nothing apparent about her.

The inevident years of pain

Despite her enduring laughter.

 

Her need to put others before her,

Her nagging desire to care.

Her determination to do better

In a life that wasn’t always fair.

 

It could have been all of these features

That made me feel the way I do.

It is impossible to pick just one,

It is impossible to pick a few.

All of these things are what make her

The one I want to say this to:

I love you.

 

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Posted Nov 24, 2015, 6:25 PM UTC

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