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A beautiful soul [I can never come up with very good titles]

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I'm looking for feedback. It is kind of a rough draft, but i would really like to hear what you all think of it. I was inspired to encourage a friend of mine who give so much of herself at an animal rescue.


She does not see a cause too hopeless.
She does not see a life insignificant.
She does not see what everyone else sees,
because she sees what everyone else does not see:
The value of a life however small.

She does not hope someone will do something.
She does not wait for someone to say something.
She does not do what she finds easy,
because she does what is needed to be done:
Care for those most vulnerable

She does not ask if she can succeed.
She does not ask what she will get in return.
She does not ask how much she should give of herself,
because she knows that enough is never enough:
Dedicating her life to spare so many.

She has the soul of a savior


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Posted Dec 8, 2015, 2:33 AM UTC

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