[2475] 44K and Out of Luck

Hello! I am looking for a critical hay-maker to the chin! Beat me down if you'd like, make me your object of spite, ruin me baby!! Put a stick of dynamite under my self-confidence and blow it up! Just be for real!

I've had this idea kicking around in my head for a few years now and have spent a lot of time on it in the past few months. This is the first 5 pages of the 23 pages that I have written so far. I am so thankful for anyone who reads my link! I haven't had anyone really look it over yet for a myriad of reasons.

Let me know what you think about the POVs.

Let me know what works better for a prologue, the first section of Coach at his home, or the next section with Coach that takes place at the bar.

Warning: if you don't like sports skip down to the bold yellow squiggly line that spans the page near the middle of the link. Everything below that has virtually no sports action in it.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1-ENv1nPBkH2DRmWIW1T421dDE2R_v_0To5u0_imoQBI/edit