My first poem- "I wanna be a shadow",

I can’t be the one

Walking in the streets with you

Well that’s what my destiny says

Cause whenever someone falls in true love

Weird games with him she plays

So what? If I can’t accompany you

And can’t be with you in your happy days

I will just be your shadow

Taking pains of the thorns

That will be coming in your way

A time would come

When god would be gone

And others might leave you alone

Cause they are not

The way they show

Themselves on the phone

With smiles and stories

They would come to your door

Your pains they wont see

And walking over me

While I am on the floor

As your shadow, I am lying there

Watching your tears, watching your fears

And feeling your sorrow from the core

Then they will get their work done

Will name your help as their fun

And the moment they find you in problem

They will just ignore

But I will be still there on the floor

As a shadow always with you

The way they left you I will just never do

My love would intensify my love would be more

Because I feel your sorrow from the core

Light will betray

Darkness in the day

Everything would be blur

They will take their own lamps

And will forget your favours

But as a shadow I will never change

And amidst that darkness

With my colour I will surround you

Will take you out from the mess

And will make you smile as I always wanted to

I will set everything right

I will bring you the light

The way you do

Each and every of my night

But as your shadow

I will be hidden and will be forbidden

From you and from your attention

But I don’t want that

Cause your smile is everything

I got in my imagination

So let me be hidden

I just want to confess

That It’s just your smile

That makes me what I am

For myself , ‘I’ matters less

I just want to be your shadow

Giving you every happiness you desire

Taking your pains

Making you smile

Cause you are the one

Who sets my heart one fire

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https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/3z03zq/lacuna/ - Great poem, check it out. Kinda has that sad but realistic feeling about it.

https://oc.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/3yz2fz/stood_up_feedback_please_this_girl_is_diving_me/ -read this one it also amazing