LSD. a spiraling cadence.

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LSD is experiencing nature,

a spiraling cadence,

a breath to the wind, a stroke to the mark,

an ember to the spark,

a notion to the remark; deliberations, notations of a spiraling cadence.

Radiation, based in rememberance,

referenced by patience,

accentuated by creation,

sent towards continuance,

an anthem for ants.

feedback 1: https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/3z8qfp/probably_hell/

feedback 2: https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/3yv6ir/high_notes_from_oblivion/

Posted Jan 4, 2016, 8:45 AM UTC · edited

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