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bradley_white

shut up old man.

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shut up old man

with your big old mouth

i don't want to hear

the things that you shout!

you're old and you're grumpy

and you look really scary

your teeth are all gone

and your ears are all hairy

you whine and you moan

and you walk with a hunch

you eat by yourself

when you're out having lunch

i don't like you old man

so please go away!

come back when you have something nicer to say

....

listen up little girl

you should not run your mouth

without knowing first

what you're talking about

you're young and naive

and you believe what you're taught

i was out learning things

before you were even a thought

you whine and you moan

while you have the world at your feet

you take advantage of every single person you meet

you have plenty of friends and you badmouth them all

i get more conversation eating lunch with a wall

I have seen a bunch

its why i walk with a hunch

so go ahead and have two hundred people for lunch

i bet you'll feel alone

the most alone of all

and wish you were out having lunch with a wall

https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/42fxtd/i_had_glitter_on_my_cheekbones/ https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/42dri9/wonder/

Posted Jan 25, 2016, 3:21 AM UTC

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