Empty Sparks Around Kurt's Spine
Blankets of light,
Twisting and falling,
Nevermind the night,
The sun, it is calling,
As flowers take flight,
In the rings around your teeth.
Blistering, yet,
A pain in your chest, but
You will not forget,
The scent of a chestnut,
Filled up to be set,
On the ground next to the bean.
Love in the air,
And needles in your arms,
Dirt in her hair,
So far from any harm,
And you don't have a care,
That you need to growl about it.
In utero's of red,
A force hard and beating,
And heaven in bed,
With immediate seating,
There's nothing you said,
That you need to be sorry for.
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Posted Feb 7, 2016, 7:14 PM UTC
God I loved this. Great descriptions and the rhythm man, the rhythm! I could totally see this being a song.
Hey, thanks, partner. This was sort of a spur of the moment thing. I was trying to pay homage to a certain music legend, so the idea was to write a song, not necessarily a poem.
Kurt Cobain right? Your use of imagery and juxtaposition is great. "Growl" is a great choice of word for his voice, describes it perfectly. The first two and last two lines are my favorite.
"growl" was a play on "grohl"