[388] Black Cats and Broken Mirrors - ch1 again ;;

After I gather crits for this, I'm going to revise it one more time and then I move on to chapter two.

Oh look it's even shorter than last time.

I tried to apply as many suggestions as possible but if I didn't work it into this version then either a) I'm going to do it in chapter 2 or later, or b) I have my reasons. So don't think I ignored your crits cuz I'm a whiny lil bitch who cried because their baby got murdered.

I want to know if the pacing and description works. I'm worried that it's too fast and doesn't make sense.

Thanks again guys, yall are awesome. Have fun