Woah this is great. The shift in perspective is awesome and really makes me wonder if this is only a human capability or if other animals are able to think that way as well.

I think I actually made a typo, the "young one" in the third stanza should actually be the "new one", but I definitely get what you're saying. Thank you for the feedback.

I REALLY like the first two stanzas, how the bird misunderstands what that means. I didn't think the third one fit at first, but it is another interesting perspective on this moment. I just wanted you to develop the misunderstanding more. 

On a mechanical level, the "new one" and "young one" kind of trip me up. Maybe find a different way of expressing this. 



		The mother bird finds a worm
				stuck in the ground squirming.
				She plans to feed it to her young
				so they might grow strong, 
				and find a worm for their own.
		
			The young one holds the worm
				hoping there will be enough
				for the new one.
			He nibbles on it every day

			The young one envies the worm
				it has seen more than she
				from its place inside the nest

Feedback 1: https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/460ve8/no_rhyme_or_reason/d02kzi9

Feedback 2:
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