[review video] funny kids doing karate!

[Review Video]. Funny Kids Do Karate. My son is always making videos for his channel. This is s funny mix of two kids doing silly karate! He's trying new things with editing and music... It makes me laugh. Especially the bloopers! As a self critique... We think it could be shorter... And more crisp! Also I think more slo mo is funny! I told him he could mention that he loves his mom and that would make it better...but he just gave me a look!! If you have ideas on special effects he would appreciate it!

Any reviews and tips appreciated! This is Just an 11 year old and his moms channel!!!! (Ok, it's mostly his, I'm just trying to be cool! Don't judge... Moms need a way to stay close to their babies!). (Yes, he is going to want to me to delete that from the comment!!!) Here's the link http://youtu.be/IdFszq9rdSo

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