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matthewmch

The Perennial - Sci Fi - [LOGLINE] / [FEEDBACK]

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Here we go.

"On an interstellar ship, an ancient android harboring a human consciousness, decides to raise and care for a little girl on board, despite shrinking resources and an impending supernova that will destroy his 10,000 year old mission to take humanity to a new world."

It's my final project for University. Any feedback will be greatly appreciated. TY :)

Posted Feb 21, 2016, 9:58 PM UTC

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