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I'm writing a steampunk/alt history novel, and am having a hard time getting the steampunk across in my blurb. Critique away!

*edited with the help of commentors

Kiranne Lee, a modern day archaeologist, has everything going her way. She's about to finish her first expedition when she discovers an artifact that changes everything. Over night she becomes the target of an influential secret society who will do anything to keep their secret. With the help of an old journal, a teacup, and a literary professor, Kiranne must survive assassins while exploring a world of steam underneath historic Denver.

Posted Feb 21, 2016, 10:06 PM UTC · edited

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