Here's my English version of Saizo and Beruka's C Rank support.
After hearing about how an originally long support dialogue between Saizo and Beruka was reduced to literally 4 lines of awkward silence (Seriously, Treehouse?!), I decided to make my own version of the support, using the fan translation as reference, and done in a way that would be more consistent with the rest of the game.
Here it is:
Saizo: Aren't you... Beruka? The assassin from Nohr?
Beruka: You must be Saizo, one of the ninja from Hoshido. What do you want?
Saizo: Oh...? It seems we both know each other's names already.
Beruka: Of course… The name of Saizo is well known in Nohr. The king's most loyal retainer… and among Hoishido's deadliest ninja.
Saizo: I had once heard rumors of a young girl, raised to kill from an early age. To think that girl was you...
Beruka: I see. Tell me... How many people have you killed?
Saizo: I should be asking you that question. Do you remember?
Beruka: As an assassin, I made it routine to keep track of how many lives I have taken. I stopped counting after Lady Camilla took me under her wing. I don't know whether it was good or bad... Just that it was different.
Saizo: Is that so?
Beruka: Now it's your turn. Do you remember?
Saizo: I… I can never forget. Even if I wanted to forget, the amount of people I have slain... It's been deeply etched in my heart. I can never forget.
Beruka: I see...
Saizo: It must be fate that the both of us would join forces like this. We both have lords that we have sworn to protect… I look forward to talking to you again in the future.
Beruka: Same here.
What do you think of it?
UPDATE: Here is an album of images I made using FEITS showing how this conversation would look in-game. (Warning: There's a lot of images.)
UPDATE #2: Thank you, Bacon_n_Lettuce for your suggestion. I changed the last 2 lines in both the images and text to reflect it.
Posted Feb 25, 2016, 1:11 AM UTC · edited