The presence of a Villain that doesn't physically appear until near the end of the series.
In the series I'm planning out I've encountered a problem, the main villain of the over-arching plot only physically appears near the end of the series. This Villain, over the series, is mentioned and talked about throughout the story, but I feel like I haven't done enough to make him have a presence throughout. I especially feel his presence is weakened as I have many secondary-villains planned throughout the series.
One idea I implemented was that the protagonist forms a mental connection with the antagonist after taking a weapon forged by the antagonist in question, as soon as the antagonist realises the connection exists, he utilises it to taunt, scare and hurt the protagonist.
Any other suggestions?
Posted Feb 25, 2016, 1:14 AM UTC
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