I'm making a tutorial video for new players and need some help

Hey everyone! Little introduction here, i have never made YouTube videos ever, and this is my first one. I created this video in order to help new new players with the game because when i first played i never found a super simple guide to use, and had to figure everything out myself. So if you have some time, please check my video out and tell me anything i could do better or i should do. So here's the video: https://youtu.be/NZWGAtJ9iCg Thanks guys.