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Narcissus

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White wash waters whisper

Drip drops glisten on the tip of my finger

I'm one with the river

Shimmering shiver while it listens, glistens,

Droplets adorn my body like glitter

My lips soft like sea foam

My body forms it's own glory:

A succulent crystalline territory

My hips marble stone quarry

while my eyes will inspire your gruesome story

Set your gaze and take me in taste

Fall upon my breast with upmost grace

Take all of me in, fall deep within me

Get lost and vicious

I will always love you, Narcissus

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Posted Mar 4, 2016, 2:01 PM UTC · edited

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