Explaining mult-pitch transitions

I'm about to teach a buddy about multi-pitch transitions. He requested a written explanation to read over first and then reference while practicing. I'd appreciate a few more sets of eyes to see if anything is obviously wrong or missing.

Also feel free to mention anything you think I should or could do differently, I enjoy learning new climbing stuff.

https://gist.github.com/deepcube/92b3fd70aefb05f620ad874d10802e67