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nesbitandgibley

We Were Different

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Our parents came from soil.

They struck the ground with iron, raked the earth with metal,

Planted carrots, green beans, rhubarb and fennel

And left behind the oil.

Not once did they come home with clear skin.

It was caked in dirt, brown and raw, all to feed their kin.

Even their hoarse voices, that herded cattle and sheep,

Could become butter soft when they soothed

Their children to sleep.

"Rest now to rise up. Rise up and early!

We can still see the stars in the morning."

We were different. No muck, no mud.

Instead, our hair was combed

And our fingernails were clean and cut.

Big Apple weekends, smoked salmon,

Cream cheese and chives,

In famous expensive restaurants

Where the rich were televised

To our living rooms, to our kitchens.

Our employment history wasn't in the ground

Nor in the woodwork or land.

It didn't give us shade,

But only told us

How many cards we punched,

How many nights we slept,

How much money we made.

There's no sparkle here.

Only in streetlights and neon signs.

Our pewter skies are too exhausted to shine,

They are coughing, clogged and charred

Because our stars wear sunglasses

And are driven down boulevards.

Our parents came from soil.

We came from concrete.


Thank you for reading. Any type of criticism is welcome and would be massively appreciated.

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Posted Apr 11, 2016, 3:44 PM UTC

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