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Why would I want to go out?

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Why would I want to go out?

Every where I go it's the same.

The same over-played, uptempo music.

And the same generic people who listen to it.

 

So I'd rather just stay in.

To look at the same four walls.

And listen to the same over-played thoughts.

 

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Edit: Thank you guys for the kind words. I used to really like doing poetry assignments in high school but never really did much on my own. I think I'll start writing more.

Posted Apr 17, 2016, 11:32 PM UTC · edited

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