Warm Bodies by A

I like the energy in this poem. And it has a tone that seems very ghost-like to me.

I saw another commenter on another poem talk about the use of questions in poems. He said usually you are either answering your own question with the poem, or you are asking the reader to answer the question. I was just curious what you were trying to accomplish with your questions.

The piece reads oddly, to me - it starts with an AAB rhyme scheme, though doesn't maintain same; the line lengths, enjambment, and punctuation are all inconsistent; there's a lot of contradiction but little expansion or discussion on same; want and need are conflated with each other. Overall - there's a lot of questions and a lot of telling, but little to no resolution or showing.