VI. The Lovers, Reversed

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VI. The Lovers, Reversed

 

"I'm running away

to find love" you said

You look to the distance

You see so far

That you're blind

to what's in front of you

I kiss your cheek

I kiss your neck

Because anything I could say

Would just be yet another cliche

 

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Posted Apr 29, 2016, 4:01 PM UTC

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