Love without light

In bastard March

Soggy though it was

It did nothing to dampen your inner light

 

Miles from home

I had pined softly

For your steady stream of consciousness

 

Into the dark

I admitted then alone

That I loved you for your entirety

 

You,

entirely light

Glowed until April showers

 

Your former lover

As fight had left her

Attempted her death, in your sweet name

 

You were soaked

Your name dripping guilt

Although she did not see you as you were

 

I had shone

For you, quietly, gently

Because someone needed to be your light

 

I sheltered you

Wrapped in soft arms

I told you your truth, to ease your guilt

 

You told me

That I was a Godsend

I knew your friendship could shelter our city from rain

 

So now, quietly

Only into the dark

I confess my love…

Where it can’t grow without warmth and light.

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I am a complete novice, so I felt a little hinky giving people advice. I hope it wasn't too bad as this is my first time posting here :)