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Thebobumman

Home for Summer

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This place used to be so much bigger

We were much smaller back then

We would stare straight up at the walls

We thought the ceiling touched the sky

As the walls got smaller

The building lost all sense of wonder

It turned into four brick walls

That slowly lost their color

Feedback: https://oc.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/4krbwp/the_first_kiss/ https://oc.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/4kkd7y/annoying_isnt_it/

Posted May 24, 2016, 5:19 AM UTC

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