[Feedback] Wounded Angels: Doors (Melodrama/12 Pages)

Logline: A young man comes to terms with his traumatic past and anxiety to lose his virginity.

Hey guys, this is the second script i've ever written. However, you guys will be looking at the 9th draft of it. I am looking for any advice! Rip it apart and criticize me. I'm looking to grow here! Thanks!

https://drive.google.com/file/d/0B8oJrJ7fmjRqVzltSmR2YVlER2M/view?usp=sharing