The Lovers Truth

My first contribution. I hope you enjoy it =). For added effect, read the parenthesis as whispers.

Steps of small,
smiles of humble,
is the social code.
(But be we naked)
the lovers shackle
shakes and stumbles

I would equate
your beauty to the sun
with one phrase.
A reaction to the
burning vision
thy smile makes

The human intention
is a tricky one.
It instills only doubt.
(But be we naked)
the lovers veil
becomes undone

I would excite
your expectations
with one look.
A response to the
tingling sensations
thy eyes took

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