Wheat Beat Knees

In my opinion, it's too rhyme-y. It takes focus away from the content.

I also agree with the rhyme scheme taking away. When a poem rhymes, it has to look and sound intentional; this is extremely hard to do over text, so it's not a big deal because we don't know how you intend for it to be said, but the rhyming here does feel a bit 'there', as opposed to 'there for a reason'.